Post by WaT on Aug 11, 2009 9:05:26 GMT -6
Whether you are just using quotation marks for your "talk" and italics for your thoughts or bold for talk Please try to keep them have them defined. It's also helpful to put in a she/he thought or he/she said in there sometimes.
While every character has their own psychosis I do not want having every other character to have 'another mind with in their own mind' Meaning demons possessions and multiple personalities are not going to be the new fad here.
Also since these 'horses' have been experimented with there is a chance that they could evolve a taste for meat. Carnivorous horses must be run by an admin first and they can not easily kill another horse. Even if they have claws and teeth.
While every character has their own psychosis I do not want having every other character to have 'another mind with in their own mind' Meaning demons possessions and multiple personalities are not going to be the new fad here.
Also since these 'horses' have been experimented with there is a chance that they could evolve a taste for meat. Carnivorous horses must be run by an admin first and they can not easily kill another horse. Even if they have claws and teeth.